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The Finish Line

Hot air blows against delicate folds
anticipation and moisture grows
Tantalizing and excruciating in its tease
lallygagging between spread knees

The suspense has me begging please,
take care of these carnality needs
Center tensions coil waiting for the strike
love bites run inner thighs, cries of delight

Peeking clit struck with searing tongue
licking and flicking, and cuming undone
Gyrating hips move on their own accord
Petitioning on lips for something more

Obliged with two fingers, one in the back
Shoplifting and spilling like a six-pack

-This Sonnet was inspired by my co-conspirator in rhymes post: https://linorobles.wordpress.com/2015/08/20/the-art-of-cunnilingus/

Do you have your own finishing touches to add to the art of cunnilingus? If so, be sure to share a post and link back to Lino and I, and we can build a virtual tapestry of sorts.

20 comments on “The Finish Line

  1. myarousal

    I’m not sure I can add anything to this incredible sonnet. As a man I always feel odd commenting on this with a woman about this. That said….I have never tired of the unique nuances of a woman, the scent, taste, and texture. The way each woman looks is always amazing…..*sigh*

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  2. myarousal

    Amazing! Simply amazing!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. missameliaandsir

    Nothing to add except DAMN! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Thank goodness for ice cubes and Bibs.
    (͡• 🔥 ͜ʖ 🔥 ͡•) ლ(🔥\◡👅◡/🔥)ლ ლ(🔥/\ ◡_xo👅xo_◡ /\🔥)ლ

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    • Wet Bliss

      I’ll take that as a three letter compliment, thank you! We can blame Lino for my randy thoughts, lol.

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      • It was easier to write WOW than, Hold on Bliss, I think it’s the big one!!!!!!!! xoxo

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        • Wet Bliss

          Ok simmer down and pop some meds, and I’ll get back in bed.

          Liked by 1 person

          • I guarantee you won’t need a stethoscope to hear my heart beat or feel the pulse racing. My cardiologist swears that a healthy sex life is better for people than medications, but like anything in life, you have to NO your limits. xoxo My Ortho doc has made some valid suggestions for relieving stress on my old joints while enjoying life to the fullest. He also suggested Velcro instead of stainless steel cuffs. )))))))))))))))))


            • Wet Bliss

              😈 Leather, nylon rope, silk ties, zip-ties, duct-tape, and more all works. Thanks for sharing a laugh today, I needed that!

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              • Improvisation doesn’t just occur on McGyver, I can attest to that, dear Bliss. One advantage to having many years behind me, abundant memories of successes, not so quite sucdesses and a few for the OOPs reels. but hey if you can’t look back and laugh, hell you haven’t enjoyed life enough. xoxo

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              • Wet Bliss

                I can’t disagree with any of that. You rock life to the fullest, Mr. G and admire you for all your vibrancy!

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              • If I’d known how much damage I was doing to my joints and body by some of the “fun” stuff I continued to do after 40+, I might have reduced a little Football, Soccer, Hill Climbing, Parachuting or marrying younger women. Then again, probably not, especially the latter. I miss them but relish the years we had together. They taught me how important it was to live your life and love each other as it was the last day. Maybe that’s why I’m delaying growing up as long as possible. And I’ve learned to slow down just a bit to reduce the “embarrassing moments” in my latter years. without a voice, I can’t “tap dance” as well as before.

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  5. linorobles

    Nice as always..👍👏, continuations lets go☺

    Liked by 2 people

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  7. augustmacgregor

    Very sexy. I don’t have any finishing touches, as I don’t want to mess with the luscious lines of the poem.

    Liked by 4 people

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