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Our Discourse ~ A duet

Written by: Day Dream Writer (Bold) & WetBliss (Italics)

Sir, I need you now
will you come to me and share
your strength, safety and control
Yes pet, what you crave
I shall rein within your soul
an indulgence to endure
If I push away
to elude tears threatening
will you let me run and hide
I will not allow
tears to run and hide away
trust my hand, endure the pain
I’m far from perfect
will you embrace all my flaws
and catch me before I fall
Within my domain
devotion will dismiss doubt
as lust entwines confidence
I have forgotten
the feeling and how to love
will you teach me how with trust
Memories you lust
beneath pain and peril eyes 
pleasures from a seasoned cuff
I’m vulnerable
emotions fully exposed
holding position to please
Acceptance is key
once I brand your barren skin
stiff hot flashes for pleasure

Once again I had the pleasure of writing with A Day Dream Writer, and this time we decided to add in some structure and control. We wrote this in Mondo poetry form, which was originally used for rapid questions and answers between Master and student. We hope you enjoyed our collaboration!

15 comments on “Our Discourse ~ A duet

  1. thereluctantpoet

    Yes, this is a format that has really great potential!! Interlacing lines or stanzas works for me!

    Here is a duet of interlacing lines off a part of a poem by Singledust.

    So, either Haiku string, or mondo Q &A or duets work for me.

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  2. Yael

    Reblogged this on Keep It Short! and commented:


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  5. Grandtrines

    Reblogged this on Lost Dudeist Astrology.

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  6. Rita

    Absolutely brilliant. I missed your words dear one and am finally catching up. Outstanding!!!!!

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  7. persoinpoesia2015

    Bravo Bravo

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