Wet Bliss

Mature Content 18+ Adults Only………………………Beautiful Loving Intense Sexual Sensations

A Lover’s Poem – Invitation

Before the day breaks
In the quiet, dawning hours
A calm surrender slumbers

Please enter the second half of this in the comments section to complete a Sedoka poem (a pair of Kataula’s 5/7/7) with me. Don’t be shy, I love your creativity! I’m waiting for you, so don’t go until you drop me three unrhymed lines with 19 syllables – thanks!

32 comments on “A Lover’s Poem – Invitation

  1. sirenlost
    02/16/2016

    She memorizes
    His every shadowed desire
    And leaves him sleeping in light

    Liked by 1 person

    • Wet Bliss
      02/16/2016

      Awe that’s so sweet and unfair that he gets to stay in bed. I appreciate your participation and words! 👍🏻😃

      Liked by 1 person

  2. niccihaydon
    02/16/2016

    Her plaything. She takes
    his play thing in hand. And stroke
    by gentle stroke she wakes him.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. persoinpoesia2015
    02/16/2016

    light from window creeps
    the hammering pounds to cringe
    a neighbor building a shed

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Kay
    02/16/2016

    Dammit. Missed a syllable.

    Liked by 1 person

    • Kay
      02/16/2016

      Peaceful exhaustion
      After all night’s offering,
      His perpetual plaything

      Liked by 2 people

  5. Kay
    02/16/2016

    Peaceful exhaustion
    After night’s offering,
    His eternal plaything

    Liked by 1 person

  6. zigzagstripes
    02/16/2016

    Only to be quietly eroded.
    Slowly taken to heights previously thought unattainable.
    Taken to where our souls copulate, combine.

    Liked by 2 people

  7. Ádhamh
    02/16/2016

    Patiently waiting
    To be taken properly
    By the one who is worthy

    Liked by 2 people

    • Wet Bliss
      02/16/2016

      I knew I could count on you to contribute. This is a lovely response, as usual. Thank you, and I was pleasantly surprised by your timing.

      Liked by 1 person

      • Ádhamh
        02/16/2016

        Why surprised? Because I caught it so soon, besides my usual follow-up on all your posts, lol? Just good timing is all.

        Like

        • Wet Bliss
          02/16/2016

          Well yeah there’s that and the fact that all of your recent posts suggest you’re overloaded.

          Liked by 1 person

          • Ádhamh
            02/16/2016

            I am. Still waiting on you to lend me that shovel!

            Like

  8. Philip Wardlow
    02/16/2016

    Hands reach on fire
    across silk sheets soft as sin
    exploring, probing, till found

    There ( I think…lol) 🙂

    Liked by 4 people

  9. Philip Wardlow
    02/16/2016

    DO OVER…I l realized I wrote ,6,7,,7 ) need more coffee)

    Hands reach on fire
    across silk sheets soft as sin
    exploring, probing, finding, you

    Liked by 1 person

    • Wet Bliss
      02/16/2016

      Ahh thanks! I love both, yet by my (finger count) the first line on both are right. It’s the last line that has 8…how about
      exploring, probing, till found.😉

      Like

      • Philip Wardlow
        02/16/2016

        Omg…You are right on the last line …( I suck today) thanks… lets keep the fire line and use yours then for the last line…….:) thanks for the catch…

        Like

    • Wet Bliss
      02/16/2016

      I could be wrong, it’s early here (almost 7am) and I’m still having me coffee too. 😉

      Like

  10. Philip Wardlow
    02/16/2016

    Hands reach in desire
    across silk sheets soft as sin
    exploring, probing, finding, you.

    Liked by 1 person

Your thoughts are important and I can't read minds, so drop me a line.

Please log in using one of these methods to post your comment:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s

Information

This entry was posted on 02/16/2016 by in Duets/Collaborations and tagged , , , , , , .

Blog Stats

  • 72,651 hits

Categories

My Lovelies

Those that keep me going

Some of the AWESOME Blogs I Follow

In10se

My View Through a Cracked Lens.

vinnieh

Movie reviews and anything else that comes to mind

Katya Evangeline

From Missionary to Sex Preacher and Loving It!

Buns Are All That You Require

Naughty Stories and Mature Content

Artist- Ted Giffin - Musician

Forum for Display + Critique of His Creative Works

nita0216blog

NITA'S WORLD OF INSPIRATION

Phoenix Risen

reality imagined, fantasy revealed

Flawed Pearls

. . . the random ramblings of an imperfect soul

Scottish Legend's Blog

The ramblings of a would be writer trying to make it in the big bad world. All work is my own and some with adult content

Hangin' With Friends

a place to let free all that we are

samanthaalexia

love, sex, happiness, poetry

Just a Girl Lost 2

Just a girl lost~ Here I share bits & pieces of me, in poetry, prose, music & posts from writers who inspire me.

VIAJES AL FONDO DEL ALSA

“Quizás viajar no sea suficiente para prevenir la intolerancia, pero si logra demostrarnos que todas las personas lloran, ríen, comen, se preocupan y mueren, puede entonces introducir la idea de que si tratamos de entendernos los unos a los otros, quizás hasta nos hagamos amigos” – Maya Angelou

random rants ruminations ramblings

different times, different thoughts

Sasha's Writings

For those who loves to live the life to the fullest......

Jessabelle

Interlude by Me

The Wacky World of Rita

. . . it is what it is

Wet Bliss

Mature Content 18+ Adults Only...........................Beautiful Loving Intense Sexual Sensations

michnavs

Poetry...in Motion

Passionate Liasons

Stories and thoughts on the dark and sinful passions within us

The Wacky World of Rita

. . . it is what it is

Babygirl's Corner

Where I can be myself and be with Daddy

Tales from the Whipping Post

Erotic Stories by D.E. Maizefield (18+ Only)

Cameron D Hamilton

Rambling nonsense for my own entertainment

Everything I Never Told You

Lucidly in shadows. Poetry from a hand that writes misty.

The Musing Quill

A Blog on Writing, Poetry, Stories & Books.

Naughty Wild Girl

I'm so good I scream out my own name during sex...

Analbarbie.

Meine Lust am Leben!

Written Therapy

- saving my sanity one word at a time -

Erotic Yearnings

Erotic Poetry and Stories

The Lamentations of Finnegan Daley

The Book Blog of A Steel Valley Scumbag

blossomsworld

This WordPress.com site is the bee's knees

razorbackwriteraus

In the sea of dreams.

Phoenix Risen

Dark thoughts from me to you...

Friends And Forums

Just another WordPress site

Only My Poetic Truth

...little bits of me escape

The Müscleheaded Blog

"Nothing Exceeds Like Superfluous Jejunity "

Madeline Harper

ReImagined

Rocky Mountain Heartbeat

words from a rocky mountain heart

Manan Unleashed

Passion in Poetry: Whispers from the Soul

williamleeone

I wonder why

CinnamonAndSparkles

If I had a power color, it would be sparkle. Landon Brinkley

%d bloggers like this: