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A Lover’s Poem II – Open Invitation

I’ll be patiently
Waiting for you, my Darling
Expecting pain and pleasure


Please enter the second half of this poem in the comments section to complete a Sedoka (a pair of Katauta’s 5/7/7) poem with me.

I love it when your creativity spills all over my…page. 😉 So don’t be shy, and drop me three unrhymed lines with 19 syllables – thanks a bunch!

36 comments on “A Lover’s Poem II – Open Invitation

  1. This Mortal Flesh

    I’m bashful but I’ll try…

    I’ll be patiently
    Waiting for you, my Darling
    Expecting pain and pleasure

    my hot breath deceives—
    teases the back of your neck
    before iced water drips down

    Liked by 1 person

    • Wet Bliss

      No need to be bashful! This is chillingly hot! 🔥 Thank you for contributing. 👏🏻👏🏻

      Liked by 1 person

  2. It’s deep inside your eyes
    that appetite for arousal
    brash and audacious

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Emily C

    I’ll be patiently
    Waiting for you, my Darling
    Expecting pain and pleasure

    Bring your bag of toys
    Taint me with enraptured sin
    I will obey your orders

    Liked by 1 person

    • Wet Bliss

      Well HELLO Emily and welcome to my site! Thanks for dropping these lines… they are absolutely delightful.

      Liked by 1 person

  4. darkgemdom

    My choice is gone
    With keys and flogger hanging off collar
    Ankles spread and locked

    Liked by 1 person

    • Wet Bliss

      Sir, I’ll give you 1/2 credit for count & 1/4 credit for topic, but your form was off..you almost got it! With a little practice you’ll be a Master, lol.

      Fixed for 100%

      My choice is gone with
      Keys and flogger hanging off
      Collar ankles spread and locked


      You will have no choice
      Keys and whip hang off collar
      With ankles spread wide and locked

      Liked by 1 person

  5. Kay

    Use me as you wish
    Chisel your name in my flesh
    Engrave me, please, I’m yours, Sir

    Liked by 1 person

    • Wet Bliss

      Stunningly perfect, Kay! 👏🏻👏🏻 I’m sure your M hears something along these lines all the time. 😃

      Liked by 1 person

      • Kay

        Thank you, WB! I appreciate the open invitation, it’s fun! I am a shameless flirt (with M) who makes more innuendos than I have a right to, lol. So, M hears about my naughty thoughts all the time! Have a great day!💜

        Liked by 1 person

        • Wet Bliss

          I’m glad you think they’re fun too! Keep being shameless, and have a great day too! 💞

          Liked by 1 person

  6. Cara

    I’ll be waiting for you

    Wearing something barely there

    Bring the whip and a blindfold

    Liked by 1 person

    • Wet Bliss

      Very nicely done! Thanks for adding your voice. 👍🏻😀


  7. persoinpoesia2015

    I’ll be patiently
    Waiting for you, my Darling
    Expecting pain and pleasure

    Until then my love
    You are to be, bathed and trimmed
    But no playing without me

    Liked by 2 people

  8. Rita

    Each second of devoted anticipation
    Shall be rewarded, My Love, with a
    touch of thunder & the balm of warm lips

    Liked by 1 person

    • Wet Bliss

      There’s always a rule breaker in the bunch, but I ain’t mad atcha I love the feel of this! Thanks, Rita…you rebel. 😘

      Liked by 2 people

      • Rita

        It’s the only way I can be – LOL

        Liked by 1 person

      • Rita

        It’s why they kicked me out of the sub-club by the way. I don’t follow rules :0

        Liked by 1 person

  9. thelonelyauthorblog

    Have the ropes ready
    Pleasure and pain will be yours
    Tonight will last forever

    Liked by 1 person

  10. VictoryInTrouble

    I’ll come bearing gifts
    Of delights you can’t measure
    In the morning, you’ll bear marks


    Liked by 1 person

  11. Peter

    I’ll come over you
    Quenching your thirst and hunger
    And loving you endlessly

    Liked by 1 person

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