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An impasse

I wish we could have an understanding
Before you get to controlling and demanding
Why does it have to be scream and shout
For us to figure this shit out

I’m a lethal bitch who takes illegal hits
In a fit of rage there’s no telling what I’d say
About the other day, I concentrated on a fatal blow
I’m not proud, truth to be told, feeling numb and cold

Now that this war in and between us has ended
It’s time to make the really tough decisions
Make a commitment to resolve these doubts
Or buy and sell each other out

10 comments on “An impasse

  1. Emily
    02/24/2017

    So truthfully spoken. And I love the line “I’m a lethal bitch who takes illegal hits”. Wonderful.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. feral
    02/20/2017

    dang… I have been at this precise moment in time not too very long ago. I am generally a very nonviolent, patient and kind person with a very long fuse but push me to the end of that fuse and things are gonna get ugly.
    If this is written from personal experience I offer huge hugs of support. Stand your ground in truth and don’t back down, shit wont change unless you DEMAND it and are truly willing to walk away if it does not.

    Liked by 1 person

    • Wet Bliss
      02/20/2017

      Gosh, sorry you’ve been here, but thanks so much for sharing and your huge hugs of support. It’s an ugly, yet surreal place to be in…reality.

      Liked by 1 person

      • feral
        02/20/2017

        I am sorry you are there 😦 Stay strong Bliss.

        Liked by 1 person

  3. Mr Modigliani
    02/20/2017

    ((Hugs)) I know how you feel

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Wet Bliss
    02/20/2017

    Thanks, Cameron. That’s exactly what I was hoping to capture in the piece.

    Like

  5. Cameron D Hamilton
    02/20/2017

    Very agressive violent imagery in this. it’s quite jarring. It’s a great piece of writing to highlight relationship conflict. I really like the way you’ve put this together!

    Liked by 2 people

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